Drown myself

  I drown myself
  in your hate,
  in your lies
  and in your pain.

I choke myself
in this graveyard
I call home.

I scream for you
but you aren't here.

I cry in my bed
and try to find
myself.

I don't remember my
name don't need it
anyways.

I left everything
with you
when everything

died.

Author's Note

yeah dont ask.

Reviews

[Jibin]

Tone set to sad though, it's a nice work dear friend. I love it's format, wording, and the whole poem, especially the last stanza. It made me to think upon again.
:)

[White Ink]

The Emo side of us has to show at some point i guess huh!
Depressing yet pretty cool.

[Coyote Poetry]

Drowning is a bad death. Quicker then most. A powerful poem. A lot of anger and disappointment in your words. Better to live and torture people with your present then died and be forgotten. A powerful poem with a lot of emotion. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[originalazrael]

Gripping, emotional and the alignment of each part made it all the more powerful. Well done.

[Kiari Sabon]

dark like it

[StarSandwich]

:D sad, but cool

[WordNerd]

Awesome, very creative :D

[Short.Nerd]

Very sad but awesome write!