Can't think about it.

a random little rant of sorts.

  If your face appears

  in my dreams, I will

  remove my brain.

  If I see you walking

  with the dead, I will

  gouge my eyeballs

  out with a knife.

  If I hear your name

  one more time, I

  will rip off my ears

  and scream.

  When I die 

  and I have no

  choice but to

  see you,

  I will look

  away. 

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Wow, your destain for whoever this is about is obvious. I like ths.

[Vanessa Rico]

WOW! This is definitely cold and heartless; nevertheless, it was a brilliant write.

[Brett Forsythe]

You have a unique style. Morbid but very good. I liked it. Keep it up!

[Jibin]

It is so cold write.....!!!!!
Love the ending!!
Nice work dear friend.
:)

[Ecko]

Pretty brutal...I like it!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Question: If you have NO choice how can you look away?
Hate is a horrible thing and this poem seeths with it well written but the theme is a poor one.

[Jess Holden]

short but to the point, very powerful and full of emotion :)

[☯]

Very short, but very deep. Truthfully, this poem made me smile. I love the way you used the exaggeration in your thoughts. I especially liked the last to lines because they are solemn and strong. Great job :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A honest and direct poem. You wrote your desire and the end result for each situation. A very strong poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Allie :)]

The pain of losing somebody, and the anger of them deserting you results in a facade of a melancholy of feelings
Most people can't figure out the tangle of emotions, but i think you've done it perfectly. You singled out one of the 2 main emotions, and described it perfectly :) I loved this! :D Great imagery!