We are the no ones.

a random rant/free verse/a bunch of random s**t i wrote because im bored

  We dance when there

  is no music to dance to.

  We hear things no one

  else hears.

  We can talk to the dead

  people, and laugh

  with the alive people.

  We can try and try.

  And fail and fail.

  But we will fail better

  with each try. 

Reviews

[imawriter]

another Z! finally ! at last!

[Bertie]

You've managed to say a lot in not very many words... It reminds me of some kind of Youth revolution moto...I know that sounds strange but its the only thing I can think to describe it as...
A good write, well done

[Short.Nerd]

Love it:)

[Talia Renee]

Loved it. Looking forward to reading more by you.

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Really good work man
I really enjoyed this, i could relate to it
I liked the subtle schizophrenic outlook thaat this poem gave off

[Patches I'm not so new..]

This is more like it! see you do listen to the voices and seem to like it

[HopelesslyDevoted]

perfection! i love it!

[+Naomi+]

"But we will fail better with each try"
Great line. Great work.
Keep writing, Danny.

[Jibin]

Very nice work!! i love the last stanza.....
:)

[Jess Holden]

Another positive one. And I love this :)