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A Poem by Tyronne Augusta
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Theistic Arena

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im confused and distraught/
i should've listened to those lessons but i fell asleep in class when they were taught/
mentally golfing out of bounds i cant stay on these courses/
as i visit ghost towns to see dead cowboys and horses/
i overslept so im running late/
i run like sonic but its pointless/
cuz time told me that he'll never wait/
run past the ticket taker "i work here" is wat i say to him/
as i sprint dodging security and enter the stadium/
im spiritually lost ask Vodu for guidance/
as i witness a battle 'tween Satan and Poseidon/
flame versus water but trident to trident/
if the bell rings early we have referee Osiris/
and if he cant choose Jesus and Buddha will decide it/
one for the history books is how i'd describe it/
the fight progresses on and the suspense lingers/
while Confucius and Shiva spectate with foam fingers/
i need some validation so my soul can lay at ease/
surrounded by these prophets, spirits, and these deities/
Muhammed, Apep, Moses, Ram what a sight to see/
who would of known religion could have such variety/
while on the front lawn Judas still dangles from a tree/
this aint a track release so no need for a chorus/
i'll just shine like the sun gazing with the Eye of Horus
 

© 2008 Tyronne Augusta


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this was real enjoyable to read, flow was good, content was the high point.

"while Confucius and Shiva spectate with foam fingers/" nice line...HA
keep it coming..

sincererly
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Posted 17 Years Ago


yo' you did good on this mayne, damn, u must know alot about religion and s**t o do somethin this crazy i rhyme for damn man...

Justin sales AKA Jsells

Posted 17 Years Ago


Well well well......he decides to post. And....I am quite impressed. You went deeper with the philosophy in this then I expected you to. You spoke different then all the commercialized bullshit that you hear every day. Keep this style.....it's unique.

Li

Posted 18 Years Ago


this was f*****g amazing. get pj to read this s**t. i'm sure he'd be impressed too. i see you've either done your research or ur a*s has just been learning a s**t load lately. your punchlines were funny. and really abstract. some weird a*s s**t

Posted 18 Years Ago



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