I love it when you hate me.

  spit on me.

  ruin me.

  you know you

  want to.

  trash me.

  harm me.

  scar my soul.

  you know i

  love it when

  you kill me.

  make me 

  a ghost.

  make me leave

  this world and

  go to a different

  dimension.

  you know

  i love

  it

  when you

  kill me. 

Author's Note

my first poem dont hate

Reviews

[Sheridan E.]

I like this. It's letting someone do what they really feel, and just go balistic. Great job!

[Anonymous]

Very nice work. A prisoner of death by choice, welcoming the pain...Although one person or the other usually ends up being destroyed. I enjoyed this piece. Thanks for posting, it was very well written.

_Cloud

[halflives]

No hating~
Well done. Good for a first poem. But what's got you so down?