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A Story by Bill Evans
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Sometimes we get second chances...

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White steam billowed from the front of my car. The acrid stench of radiator fluid filled the air. I shoved weakly at the quickly deflating, blood-covered airbag. It billowed as the air quietly rushed out with the light scent of baby powder.


Oddly, I felt no pain. The impact had been so hard that my seatbelt broke from the frame. I looked for my cell phone, but didn’t see where it had gone. I never finished the text letting my boss know I was going to be late.


I stepped out of the truck; the driver’s side door was gone. It looked like someone crumpled an origami truck into a ball and then tried to straighten back out. People rushed around me to the other vehicle.


My mind raced. Did I hurt someone?


I made my way to the other victim’s car.  The damage didn’t appear any less severe than mine. I waved my hand trying to clear the steam from my vision. I saw a man slumped forward on the steering wheel. A long, jagged cut ran the length of his bald head. The man moved. He lifted his head and looked in my direction with a confused look on his face. It was Daniel. My boss. A paramedic rushed to him, speaking comforting words and checking him for injuries hidden beneath the bent and torn metal husk.


I looked back to my truck. I gasped. A headless body lolled to one side in the driver’s seat, one arm slug over a bloody stop sign, still attached to the post, sticking from the passenger seat.


Horror and fear and remorse trampled my loose grip on the reality before me. I screamed, but no noise came. The world around me began to fade to darkness. A sensation of falling washed over me.


I’m glad you’re okay Daniel. I’m sorry.


Accepting my own death seemed easier than I would have imagined. My life had been full and happy. I would miss my family.


I’m sorry I won’t be there to see you grow up, Little Man.


The darkness slowly lightened. It was bright, but not unpleasant. I didn’t know what was next for me. Maybe there was another cycle to life, maybe rebirth. Maybe Heaven. Whatever came next, I knew it wasn’t the end; I would continue to exist.



I closed my eyes, only for a moment. A moment.



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I swerved at the last possible second. I missed the front of the car by a hairs breath and slammed hard into a shallow ditch. Squealing wheels and the smell of melting rubber cleared my confusion. I looked around, pushing the airbag out of my face. My face hurt. My nose was broken. Tears streamed into my vision. There was a knock on my window. I turned.


“You okay?” The tempered glass muffled Daniel’s voice.


I nodded yes. He gave me thumbs up and pressed his cell phone to the window.


‘Daniel, I’m gonna be la…” It read.


“Me too,” Daniel said.

© 2014 Bill Evans


Author's Note

Bill Evans
As with all my stuff here... it's rough draft.
Written for a story prompt @writersdigest.com

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Bill Evans
Bill Evans

New Iberia, LA



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