Waking

Winter waves and fades away

And Earthen anchors whisper, waking

All around their boughs are shaking

Time for breathing in the day...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Aethereal]

I thoroughly enjoyed your first line, and it inspired me to add two more lines to it which you may have as a gift:

Winter

“Winter waves and fades away”
Leafage shades green glades all day.
Strong cascades fill grades with clay.

[Kenaz]

Thank you for your addition

[Alveron]

I love how you were able to catch that tenderness that you see when snow starts to melt and flowers bud. To many times we try in vain to explain this feeling that's inside us. You however achieve we others have failed.

[Kenaz]

Unfortunately the snow does not seem to want to go away here. Soon we'll have that feeling when the trees turn green and we can all smile again.

[Saddam]

A very nice poem on the nature. I like natural poetry and this is one of them. Love your art to say your big in short and to the point. love this.

[Kenaz]

I too like natural poetry, thanks for stopping in

[Lydia Shutter]

What a lovely poem of nature. There is a soft and comforting feeling throughout. Lydi**

[Kenaz]

Thank you for stopping in to read it

[Ty]

I for some reason find it easier to write things that go on forever than things like this. But this demands just as much from the reader. It's very calming. Thank you for sharing this.

[Kenaz]

Thanks for taking time

[Kenaz]

Winter waves are like snowy blankets over all that's hidden underneath....
This is beauty my friend, it has a serene feeling of pure art, it's in no way "simple" if you ask me,
it's profound, deep, and it lingers, the meaning beyond just ink can tell.

I see an anchor, also as a bow, it has the same shape, and it has a meaning of vastness... profoundness, and of searching and yearning for stable and steady times... great piece. But how could you not write another? :) I'm smiling,

- Elisa

[Kenaz]

Thanks E, your words mean a lot

The pleasure is all mine my dear friend.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Short, simple, yet great and sweetly written. Nice job.

[Kenaz]

Thanks for reading