Pretty Gurl...

pretty gurl... under the light of the cherry moon I wanna build castle's in the sand with you. this is were the seeds of our Luv can blossom & bloom. we'll set forth 1 set of footprints upon land as I... carry you if you... shall carry me over sea's... construct a... pyramid in your honor with the wave of my hand. lets nurture this luv till its 200 yrs past grown so we may see the fruits of what we've sown..   i'll be ur corsage an u can feed me petals from ur car-naton free as a breeze we'll be gallivanting across creation. this mustang luv's to run free, come, come run with me... an... bathe in the crystal clear waterfalls as ur water falls   letz... quinch our thirst from rivers an streams as i further string this luv 2gethr pluck our... dinner from tree's. feed you from the plate between your breast as you lay & rest... bury our ego's & insecurities deep... in the forgotten mystical forest. plant unity... cultivate hope & feed salvation to all the nations. engulf ourselves in the beauty of the emerald highlands. i stand a tall man with you in hand. be my solider slim & I'll be your solider man... lets... start our own movement. we can... revolutionize the word revolution...   4 u are my nation an with you at my side I feel like I can pegasus fly. anything can be done. feed the children of the world. bring tyranny to its feet & crown peace... I'll... give my life to end genocide. if you shall stand with... not in front or behind. raise my pride to the alter 4 sacrafice... let us... exhalt on high together. base my thought on you... so... we may speak with out the permission of words... the god within you reacquaints itself to the god within me. the melting of your flesh against my flesh is the marriage. our Luv is the salam vow.   i'll give u my salam vow... you are Queendom... I am Kingdom... we... complete heaven. feed me energy & I'll energize you... feed me energy... & I'll... energize you...   breath in me, i'll breath in u closer 2 me, closer 2 u gettin closer 2 me iz gettin closer 2 u... grapple your mind around the simplicity of devotuion... pause... on that thougt... Mmm...mmm... ol' black magik what have you gone & done... but first... "Pretty Gurl...oOH pretty gurl... come holla at...me" "oOH Pretty Gurl... pretty gurl... come...holla at...me" because the kid from the C-H-I- today... is feelin kind of shy... 4 fingers an a pen poetry...

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

I've read this poem a thousand times (not literary of course). In alot of poetry where the
man is talking about his lady or who he's looking at he talks about her how she looks, her
personality and stuff like that. I love how you tell her that you two will be a team taking
the world by storm, enjoying one anothers presence while doing good. I like the whole
poem, i could sense a bit of longing in it too. As I was reading it, it felt like you yearned to
be able to do these things to give yourself to a real woman and for her to give herself to you.
I dig, big time. My favorite part....well my second favorite after the endind stanzas are:

the god within you
reacquaints itself to
the god within me.

the melting of
your flesh
against my flesh
is the marriage.

our Luv is the
salam vow. i'll give u my salam vow...

you are
Queendom...
I am Kingdom...

this is so beautiful to say, my breath caught and i bit my lip, you push good buttons
the emotion in your words are amazing. Luvluflove it....another fav cause your just that raw.