Timpid FlOw...

 

 

tracing your
caligraphy curves
leaves me dizzy.

i dont even
have to look
&...i
still get vertigo
off your hooks.

gotta
nibble
small bites...

can i...get next to that...

Timpid flow...

molassess mental
set the stage...
4 your feature presentation.

my attention
held captive...
leave me shackled
inprisoned within
the prisim of your
soliloquy.

what if I...
motion across our great divide.
so...we can form new
elemental poetry patterns.

 

split the poetic atom.

you can be...
the lion's head
I'll make up the rest
an set ablaze
the page
with the click
of the sword...

Timpid flow...

so profound
its amborsia
in your mouth.

tea spoons...
don't measure up
runneth over my cup.

you stack
the building blocks of my
imagination up
like Hasbro...
to a...fortress,
resting just beneath
a caravan of stars.

now...leggo
& give me some more
concock another
potion of emotions...
dazzle me another riddle of thoughts...
let me once more
gaze upon
your minds maze.

I just want to get to...that...

Timpid flow...

sharing the same space
on the same page.

I'll find...
exotic you...
tropical you...
the Euphrates you...
& windy you too.

because...

you blow me back.

in truth...
thats what your words do.

the flow is
so timpid
timpid is...the flow

YES...

you can even
give the ocean
some go...

So...so

can we rub letters

timpid...flow



4 fingers an a pen poetry...

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

Wow your visuals are so great I love how you talk of the woman's 'poetry'
in this it's so creative. Got me slightly envious so you know it's good!
Because your not only telling us that you adore her body and love to
see it, your also talking about her mind and how intelligent she is. I'm
loving the love brilliant again!

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

Nice, i like the metaphors. Very creative, its flow was different from anything i've read so far.

D

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Nicely written, love the metaphors and the collation of toys and games to get yoour point across. Very creative and a great display of talent.