FALL IN...

 

"all the

hazards of my life

fall back

or

back i fall"

 

now...fall in

 

fall in into the story

Falls back

fallin

 

dried

from the inside

im natures leaf

fallin

 

voices callin

fall on knee's

clasp hands

into the good book

 

read

psalms

written on the lines

of my palms

 

devine instructions

incoded in the lines

on my

wrist an arms

 

tell me

when the day came

when rain

became

synonymous

with pain

 

where's water

when i need her

 

come teacher

teach...

 

got a

brawl

brawlin in me

 

you know

i dont

react well

when they preach

 

fears a leech

leeched on

leechin

possible

possibilities away

 

so i need

my shoulders

2 be

broader than me

 

broaster

this chicken inside

 

skin

thicker

than Serena

Will--i--amS

so... yes

i am Legend

 

Venus flytrap

 

gotta flytrap

that

traps nuthin

but spoken words

 

an if...

i can just

regurgitate

these words

i'll put

wings 2 words

 

away young bird

fly...

young spoken words

  

servin em up

@ speedz

of a hundred an 4

 

ace's up

 

its 30 love

soon 2 be 40 love

 

with

preperation

an belief

 

face

the preface

4 me

2...

 

enter

fear's Colosseum arena

 

face his

armored armada

 

but 1st...

fashion

faith an karma

into a Soulcaliber

 

45 plus 300 calibers

 

unlimited amunition...

 

as long

as i am

 

become

a livin

light saber

with the tooth

of a Saber

 

go

Wolverine beserk

 

the last Samurai

1st 2 serve

last 2 stand

 

at last

on my own

feet

i stand

 

Bruce

wanted

you 2

"Enter the Dragon"

 

all i want

is 4 you 2

 

"Enter the life of a whole man"

 

so lets

exstract

the canine

from the

DNA strand

&

become

the human being

known as "MAN"...

 

"all the

hazards of my life

fall back

or

back i fall

fall...

or back i fall"

 

 

fall...

 

FALL IN

fall into the new

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4 fingers an a pen...

Reviews

[Astrid Hamilton]

p.s.

I can't begin to tell you how proud of you i am
i think this is my favorite line, above all:

all i want

is 4 you 2



"Enter the life of a whole man"


...(and i want to enter the life of a whole woman)

{disregard to guard, whole to the whole}

this is so sweet in its honesty, so tender.

[Astrid Hamilton]

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THAT is LITERATURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That is everything poetry is made of, the concoctions of connections in alliteration and separation
like this verse, which is brilliant

tell me

when the day came

when rain

became

synonymous

with pain




What I think is so amazing about your poetry, dear,
is that every thought that everyone thinks,
we know, for instance that tears may be perhaps synonymous with rain,
and sunshine with smiles,
and love with happiness,
and fear with sorrow,
or fear that is not derived from the DNA strand, per se, but from products of the realities in
the adversity faced with, then that links back to being synonymous with rain;
refrain!
and see!
what your poetry does to me...
i smile,
the reain is dewdrops,
like sweet love,
and you, poet,
are the sway.