Angel

okay so it was valentines day and i couldn't help but to took and notice how some of ther guys looked at their girlfriends, wifes, fiances...this is what i came up with... =]

She's my angel... a marvel of Love
My angel knows what to say that will make me smile
She's my light in this cold dark world
When ever I am away I feel presences near me
Her beauty is a sight that most haven't seen but heard of
Her smile melts the ice in my heart and warms my soul
Her eyes that see into mine show her problems
Her voice is that of something that could calm a savage beast
A body that God took his time molding... A heavenly mystery
I dare not to touch, 'fraid that she might be a mere dream
Angel of mine hold me tight 'till the end of time
Please don't let this end, or I will wither away in this frozen wasteland

© 2010 thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:

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Nathan Durham

This poem really spoke to me. It made me think of the way I feel towards my woman. This was a well written piece. It flowed well.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Britt Foster

This is a really sweet poem. :]
Well-written, and it really captures the emotion of love well.
Keep up the amaziiing work! ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago

Tina Kline

A very beautiful love poem directed at the important women in men's lives. I think you did a wonderful job on this. It creates a very lovely image of women.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Havatara

I thought it was a good poem, but in the line: "I dare not to touch, 'fraid that she might be a mere dream," why didn't you put "I dare not touch, afraid that she might be a mere dream" instead? That makes more sense to me, but I guess our minds work differently. And the end just seemed . . . odd. Don't ask me to explain, but it just didn't really feel like the end of the poem.