15 lines to describe it all

I am alone for I have been abandoned
I am unloved for I have been avoided
I am invisable for no one sees me
I am helpless for no one is there for me
I am speachless for I have no reason to speak

I have no one 
I am loved by no one 
I am invisable to all
I am helpless because no one cares
I am speachless because no one hears me when I try to say what's wrong and what's bothering me.

I'm just a completely helpless person trapped in this terrable place.  

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[Havatara]

There are some spelling errors in this one. Lines 3 & 8: invisible Lines 5 & 10: speechless Line 11: terrible. I don't know if where you are it's just spelt differently or what, but other than that I liked the poem and what it was trying to say. Also, why is it called 15 lines to describe it all? Should it be 11? There's only 11 lines, in any case, and I'm kind of confused on that point. It was still a good poem.