Together Forever, or Never at All

Together Forever, or Never at All

A Poem by thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:

Three months together

Three months apart

What's the difference

Where do we start

 

If it wasn't for you

If it wasn't for me

What would've happened

Where would we be

 

In eachothers' minds

Or in eachothers' arms

We release eachother from

Stressful bars

 

Together forever

Or never at all

Without eachother

I know we'll both fall

 

You need me

As much as I need you

Hopefully it'll stay that way

We'll just sit and enjoy the view

 

Our parents don't understand

What's the point in being together

They ask

Because we want to be forever

 

Hopefully one day

They'll all understand

And let us be

Just take my hand

 

As long as I have you

I'll have no fear

Because you make all that

Dissapear

 

Forever in my mind

Forever in my heart

Here we are together

Our new lives start

© 2009 thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:


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It was really good! I liked it, and it's sad that half the time they're apart and half the time they're together. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww, i really liked this one. So sweet. Good job expressing how you feel. Yeah, the first commenter was a B***H.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked. I it flowed great. I don't know why the person below didn't like its real good. Keep writing. =]

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CLICHE. I may have just vomited a little. Work on your style, it's horrendous

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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