ToTruly Want To Die

It's like nothing you've ever felt before

To truly want to die

At every chance you get you think of ways to do it

And when your not doing that, you cry

Or stare blankly at the wall

And wish for something better

Because nothing else matters and nothing else helps

All you can do is wallow in your misery

And wait for someone to save you

But no one ever comes

And no one ever will

Because your fat and ugly and worthless

No one cares about you

Or if you live or die

So the only thing left to do is just that

Take the pills and cut your wrists

Or tie the noose around your neck

Shake and wait for the tears to stop

For your eyes to close and never open again

Maybe then they'll notice

Maybe then they'll remember your name

And think about you before they go to sleep

An dream about you while their sleeping

And maybe one day they'll feel as bad as you

And truly want to die

They'll know you would have saved them

If only you were here

With their last breath they'll call your name

And slowly slip away

In heaven you'll see them

And they'll hug you and love you forever

Because there's nothing left to do

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Nathan Durham]

This is a perfect score in my mind. This echoed through my mind, tearing apart wounds of old. This actually sounds like something that could have been pulled from my mind in the past. It was so real, the pain, the desire, all the possibilities to consider... This caused me to reflect over my past and see the trauma that has not only affected me and the subject of the poem, but thousands of poor tortured souls.

[-WolfReaper (NERV)]

Wow.

The first six lines - I know all about that.

Very good, it captures the emotion and feeling orbiting around suicidal thoughts well.

[Star Shyne]

You have a few spelling errors. But other than that, this poem is wonderful, but so so sad. I enjoyed it very much, and can feel the person's pain very easily. good job