Pool of Dispair

Pool of Dispair

A Poem by felweed
"

Poor discription of my life and the person who has started helping me change. Thank you Lexi

"

Pool Of Dispair

It was so dark, but I did not care

feeling the waves of deep dark dispair

Living alone in this deep dark pool

letting no one touch me to make me their fool.

I was losing my strength, losing my soul,

But this isn't living, or so I've been told.

Seeking an answer I lifted my head

hopelessly hoping that I would stay dead.

But someone stepped forward and said to me HI

shocking me speechless for a very long while.

With eyes so bright and so full of charm

never wishing to do me no harm.

She stripped away my shell and left me bare,

taking my essence, my heart and my soull, I did not care

Raising my spirits, raising me hope

not really caring if I could cope.

She took my hand and taught me to walk,

showed me her laughter and got me to talk.

She gave me her love but never her heart

So I must be careful not to lose my small part.

Because if it would happen that she no longer cared,

I would sink swiftly in that pool of dispair.

 

 

© 2009 felweed


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Awwww [: I love this. Dont be afraid to have this up. Your a great writer. :P

Posted 15 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

74 Views
1 Review
Added on May 16, 2009

Author

felweed
felweed

mytovvn, CA



About
The following words, are they my life or my sick imagination that is full of strife But what you think or want to beleive remember my words cuz they all came from me. more..

Writing
Feeling Hate Feeling Hate

A Poem by felweed