my first love poem

idk

forbidden love
so bitter yet so true
i didn't know how to love
until i first saw you.

dustin your beauty
had caught my eyes
now i can't get you
out of my mind.

your voice is like a song
singing in my head
if i can't have you
i might as well be dead.

our love is like a wave
my emotions flow up and down
but no matter what
i will always come around.

never will
our love end
even when
we're both dead.

Reviews

[Bells]

So sad! But terrific!

[Emily B]

aw, Jamie, it's awesome!!!! Great job on this.