THE LIES WE WANT TO HEAR

first I was blind, now I can see

I LOVE YOU... as you walk out the door.I MISS YOU... what you say because you can sense my insecurity.again.I'M THINKING OF YOU... at the same time you're thinking of somebody else as well...MY HEART BELONGS TO YOU... but it was given to someone else and you never took it back.I WISH I WAS WITH YOU... what you say so I can stop complaining about being alone and feeling lonely.I NEED YOU... kissing me with your eyes closed hoping someone else might tell you the same thing.YOU'RE SO SPECIAL... but only on birthdays and anniversaries.WHAT WOULD I DO WITHOUT YOU?... but everyday you're planning your life without me.I'LL ALWAYS BE HERE FOR YOU... but that never includes the moments when I actually need you with me.I'M SO THANKFUL WE MET... is there a time limit on this? an expiration date? how am I suppose to feel when you throw me away like sour milk? I THANK GOD EVERYDAY THAT I FOUND YOU... do you forget to thank him when you're kissing someone else? in their arms? in their bed? I ONLY HAVE EYES FOR YOU... when was the last time you looked into mine and noticed I was hurting.I WANT YOU SO MUCH... only at your convenience. only at your leisure.I CAN'T GET YOU OUT OF MY MIND... but I'm not alone in there. I have company.I DON'T WANT ANYBODY ELSE BUT YOU... until you wanted another. now lust has become greed.so now you want everything YOU MAKE ME A BETTER PERSON... where is this person now? Where has this person been hiding for so long? I LOVE...just stop.enough. how do I know when you lie to me...you start talking.

Author's Note

It's the pain being stabbed in the heart when you realize you're not the only one

Reviews

[Diane]

wow. people should be straight forward when it comes to matters of the heart. When people drag it out it hurts worse for all parties involved. Hate to see sad ending but on a high note. This could leave a spot open for someone better to walk in to their life.

[RacialRainbow]

Wow ..... :( Amazing! Keep it up.

[Dave]

It's a paradox that love can give us the sensation of soaring as with the eagles over the highest mountain peaks and at the same time the feeling that we are being dragged through the depths of hell.

Take care - remember it's so often worth it to soar with the eagles, even if it's for only a while.
Dave

[Anonymous]

I really love this, but I would have loved it FAR more if you had set
it
up
like
this
where
each
phrase
had it's own line
It would have given more power to the words, but sill was a really great piece!

[rosalie]

this is a beautiful piece with so much emotion. very well done

[Jules]

Just heartbreaking. Truly well done and, well, heartbreaking.

[J. Hampton]

Some very vulnerable content...
The ever fluctuating line between love and hate...

[the Honest ghost]

Oh gosh this story sounds painful. I understand this very well though.

[Poetic License]

Wow. If every word of that isn't the truth, I don't know what it is. What is more painful, the silence or the lie? The absence or misplaced attention? This goes right to the heart of it... to the heart of all things, even those aside from love. I am so very, very sorry you are experiencing this. The pain is unrelenting, I know. I wish there were magic words to say, but that is fairy tale myth. Instead, I will say I understand your pain, and I wish I could remove it. Sending you peace.

[DarkArtz 0703]

tears are falling because I know what this piece is about