Waiting/Goodbye

Waiting/Goodbye

A Poem by KCthelastboyscout
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Lost love

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I belong to you. Across oceans of time. Season-to-season. I am yours,still. many years ago we were young and timeless. Our love was stronger than most but not forever. Older now. Fading. Memories of us are few and far between. Still the image of your face is vivid and everlasting. The color of your eyes. The look of your mouth when you smile. I'm awake. My eyes are open.I see the design of your face clearly.Eternally beautiful.But I lost you.so I lost everything. Although another replaced you in my life, no one can replace you in my dreams,in my heart,in my soul. And now my light extinguishes into darkness and as i close my eyes for the final time it is you I take with me into the unknown and hereafter...True love is stronger than death.

© 2017 KCthelastboyscout


Author's Note

KCthelastboyscout
Hard to write trying to find the right words to say. I believe whoever reads this will find the true meaning of what I have written.

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Thank you for sharing, a great piece with such emotion and imagery. I think your wording was astounding. I hope everything is well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I just read this and am in awe.. it is beautiful and also the thought that the one person in your youth you carry with you silently in your heart and take her with you as you die... no matter what

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very inspiring and amazing. Your talent of writing is quite flawless. realllly well done. hard to say but i was impressed

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful. Just down right true love. Love doesn't end with death does it?

Posted 7 Years Ago


"I see the design of your face clearly."
A beautiful line that says so much.
The warmth radiates off the page. Nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


im reading this at 2:00 in the morning. Because I am missing a friend. because she left me. and im just... here.

it was beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


i like this. i connect to this. it filled me with memories of my own lost loves who resurface sometimes in the face of a stranger on the street or a song i don't like to play. my old lovers are with me forever. Even though I have found another mate.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. Just freaking wow. This is so beautiful and intoxicating. What everyone would give to have this written to them - to be loved eternally, beyond all life's boundaries.

I would watch the spacing and sentence end.
(But I lost you.so I lost everything.) Missing the space between sentences and the capitalization or maybe an intended comma?

I think if you really police your spacing around punctuation, this is a knockout.

I am still feeling that "awwwwwwww" moment deep in my heart. I absolutely love this. I hope you do not have to wait for death to be one with your true love again.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I can see it is your true meaning. Love eternal. Lovely concept, the idea that people are meant to meet from a time long ago when 'we were young and timeless'' Is there a reason you do not use the usual poem format?

Posted 7 Years Ago



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