Lacquered Dreams

Come with me

Holding you
as the wind
holds
a flame

We twirl
the day
as the sun
twirls
the world

The sky
our carousel
gallop
with me
on lacquered
dreams

Reviews

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

Beautiful word choices - so few words saying so much. It is like they are a sweet whispered promise :) Nice

Kath

[holly]

These are light and pretty images - not that you can't write dark and awful, I'm sure - but how refreshing! This was a pleasure to read. Thanks for posting.

[cest la vie]

Oh, I echo Emma's review..
So much said with so little.
That is the beauty of life.
Wonderful poem!!

[emmajoy]

Few words saying so much. This is beautiful, subtle. Wonderful post.