My observations from far

I imagined this poem when a sheen female stood ravishingly infront of me then later scribed it

My observations from far.

A flawless picture falls on my retina
The stimuli comfortably moves quicker
As I subconsciously wait for the picture
In a split second someone sheen is perceived
Like the early rays her glamour I gently receive

My pupil vigorously dilate to accommodate
Her extravagant exquisite elagancy that afterwards I'll contemplate
She looks at me ardently with brown beautiful eyes
And I stare sharply hoping to see her heart and analyse
But before I can she turns leaving thy mesmerized

The impulse interpreted also went to my heart
Adorning every artery,vien and conspicuously every part
Her gorgeousness is now a constituent of my blood
I meditate about her relentlessly
And hope to make her mine to infinity

Reviews

[Warrior]

The word choice you use is brilliant such as: flawless, retina, stimuli, subconsciously, and more. You chose to use intricate words in some of your lines, and that is good.