Convicted Romance

Just a small paragraph on a scene that I love very much. I think females will like this more than we, men. These are lines that came out of my mind out of the blue.

Kick the door, jump off the floor. Two legs around my waist, two arms around my neck, what the heck, play on the deck. Those juicy lips, an initial meeting. Our mouths moving in concord, getting the feeling that they couldn't get enough of each other. No move of retreat. Her chest leaning on mine with that smooth and soft sense of her b***s. Her bum in my grip, holding her up and up, with the fervid kiss. Passionate it was, more passionate it became with the touch of her delicate hair. I just couldn't retain myself and off we threw each other on the bed, rolling on each other, and her hands on my chest and mine on her back. I got more aroused at the impact of her tender skin. Kissing over. I slid my lips down her neck, she closed her eyes.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[HVedder]

Hot.
I like it.
If I could make a suggestion it would be to add some metaphors to the characters emotions or adjectives to the movements, to make it less "mechanical "and more "theatrical".

[Tevin Armoogum]

Thanks a lot for your review. I will take this into consideration for my next one.