Tick Tock

There once was a girl off her rocker

Who could not find her tick �" tocker.

She searched and she pried.

‘No heart here!’ she cried,

But all they could do was mock her.

Reviews

[Sam woodlock]

Brilliant limerick, really enjoyed this

[Tess Nicholls]

Thanks for reading Sam!

[Saddam]

yes this is amazing and diffrent kind of poetry. well done keep it up dear.

[Tess Nicholls]

Thanks Ssadd, nice to hear from you.

[Lucy Allison]

I've never read a limerick with that much emotion in it before, a very good piece of writing! Thanks for sharing and welcome to writers cafe!