Elemental

Like the wind she's uncatchable

but somehow he caught her and stole her heart.

Like fire she'll burn you; but she stays cold as ice

pretending his lack of caring dosent hurt her

Like water and air, she needs him in order to live.

but to him she's invisible

He never realized that her life revolved around him.

Now they aren't near each other and her world is tumbling down.

Her love destroys her

His not knowing destroys her

He is her god, though he dosen't realize it.

He is her soul, heart, and mind

If he told her to leave and never return

she'd be heartbroken

If he told her to love him

she'd jump at the chance and never let him go.

He's her Earth, her Fire, her Water, her Air.

She's a small part of his past.

To her , he's Elemental

To him, she's Mental.

Author's Note

Please review.
If you're reading this, and you know to which 'him' I refer, call me so I can explain.

Reviews

[Vivie]

Took a huge intake of breath once I read this. And then all the emotions started riling up within me like this real unstoppable storm.

To be honest, this is really well written poem.
Elsewhere, it actually hit me on the spot.
Little did I know that you missed me so much.
Lest you actually punch me in the face for saying that becase you probably will.

Maybe dear, you should t-e-x-t.
Explosions are just rippling through my head.

[Sami Khalil]

"He's her Earth, her Fire, her Water, her Air.

She's a small part of his past.




To her , he's Elemental

To him, she's Mental."

A wonderful elemental poem as well as mental...Bravo.............