Chapter 1

I rounded the corner of main street hoping that with my blade of wood wtih the screw cap end that held my hidden dagger i would find him , the b*****d that killed my mother and brother , as i always wish to look him in the eyes as i plunge my blade into his heart, but i had no such luck . What i found instead had supprized me completely , there she was a girl no more than sixteen running down the abbandoned road in steletos with a mini skirt of pure black and pink feathers at the lowest seam and all she had for a top was a plain clean black belly shirt . She was screaming . Directly behind her walking , no stalking , a leech with jet black hair ice white skin and the fullest lips i'd ever seen - but i knew what lay beneith fangs sarper than the tip of the sharpest blade. I sprung into action , taking the fighting stace - right knee to the ground , left leg extended , right hand in front offering balance , my wickedly curved blade in my left hand. I did not have the chance to defend myself thought because in a milisecond he was behind me my arms gathered in his right hand alone. At that moment i knew i was going to die.

   " You inturupted my feeding ,huntress, i should kill you now but perhaps I should just feed on you instead. " Said the vampire holding me back and with that he bent his neck towards mine i could feel his breath on my throat , " right there" he whisperd using to fingers from his left hand to point out where he was going to sink his fangs into my flesh , the feel of his lips before the fangs were oddly comforting and it only stung for a milisecond as it does when getting a shot . When he began to drink the colors i saw in my minds eye were amazing briliant shades of every color to perfect to describe . I could hear his voice in my mind Relax Jazlyn he said and panic rushed through me as he spoke my name , but i relaxed i felt as if i had no choice I won't hurt you , please just trust me  and i didn't understand why must i trust him if he is only using me as a meal. I trust in many but no leech is worthy unless they are newly made have not killed and are searching for some sort of wood to plunge into their heart ! i screamed with my mind and soon wished i had'nt because then without breaking the seal from my neck he sliced his wrist and opened my mouth. Then he pulled away , myself still dazed from the blood loss i drifted back to my body too slowly , before i knew it my mouth was full of a sweet liquid taped shut and i was being blinked somewhere where i was shackled into wooden stocks with only one thought to me and only one thought from him either way i'm dead , either i choke on his blood or i become one of them .

" Have fun choosing ,Jazlyn " the Vampire said removing the tape from my mouth and imediatly i spit it out but it was all to late i was already blood-bonded to him . and once your blood bonded to a vampire if he dies you die therefor i could'nt kill him .

" Hey!" i snaped after him " whats your name ?" he stoped suddenly .

" you can call me Aubrey , Aubrey Quinn "  

s**t , now you've done it Jaz you got yourself blood-bonded to the only son of Rashel Jordon and Jhon Quinn .  Rashel was a vampire hunter until her husband ,Jhon,  was kidnpped and he finally got back to her and changed her because he was nearly starved to death while held prisoner , he drained her of blood then gave her his own to save her life .Aubrey was the fith most powerful vampire in the world , and he could do with her whatever he pleased , he could change her ,he could feed on her , and he could keep her prisoner, he could even track her down if she escaped , he could do everything to her ,except kill her .   

      I sat and contemplated on what to review over this  enticing peice finnally settling on: So far , so good . Though a little predictable in the way you started , it defenitly became more confusing , wich can be either disasterous to a novela or quite pertent . We'll just have to read on to see if this story will burn out or if it will thrive on the little oxygen you've given this flame of a story to survive , my advise to you : dont bring in the life support just yet .

    Quite satisfied with my review i turned my computer off and looked out my window to see if he was still there. Not supprised at all by what i saw , after all he'd been stalking me for over a month. I had already called the police , but since he had'nt taken any moves of violence towards me it was'nt a prioity case . what a screwd up world we lived in. so i went to go get my Pajamas and on the way to the dresser i stopped at the window looked the creep straight in the eye and flipped him off. He scared me , he Reminded me to much of the character aubrey in the story i all to recently read , he reminded me of him in al the impossible ways , i blinked and he was gone . Good , now maybe i can sleep without being watched. I thought to myself.

     Then the unthinkable happend ,my stalker, the one who seemed so non-violent , crashed in through my window . Naturally i started screaming, and he started to wrestle me to the ground . When he finally won he put his hand over my mouth but long before had the screaming stopped , i bit down on his hand. Hard.

"Ow! God damnit why do you people always bite me?! " My attacked yelled in outrage more than pain. I started screaming again. No . Shhh.... You don't want to scream anymore . In fact all this screaming is making you sleepy , you want to sleep .you trust me .You know your safe with me .  He said this , but his lips didn't move . Almost roboticly i fell to sleep , the last thing i rember was him lifting me and placing me in the passenger side seat of a car and belting me in , followed by a series of clicks that could only be handcuffs . He thinks of everything there's no chance of me escaping . I thought to myself as i drifted off to sleep.

Author's Note

The spare story and review are written by me , owned by me , and anyone who claims other wise is lying i wrote them myself you can take my word and if you do not belive me ask anyone in my frieds list they will prove that These peices are written from my own hand.

Reviews

[Kit]

Hmmm.... Interesting . I don't like how you started out with another one of your stories , but other than that it's very well written.