Moment

The moment you forget.

Mind wanders with regret.

Eyes blurred, lose focus.

“What’s my current purpose?”

Is spontaneous enough?

Chasing a dream, tough.

As a child we rushed,

what was all the fuss?

The lost moment finds.

The lost moment unwinds.

The lost moment reminds.

Messes with our minds.

In that moment there is clarity.

We connect with our reality.

Endless possibilities.

Test our comfortability.

A chance to breathe.

Rebirth and see.

Are we where, 

we want to be?

Take that lost moment,

to reset your focus.

To find yourself and

your new found purpose.

Reviews

[Taurean X Hunter]

This poem is off the chain, I love your style.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Very good like your style

[eatmills]

Nice tempo and structure. Somber and inquisitive. The last verse is perfect and and really brings it to a conclusion.

[CoffeePerson]

amazing word choice and rhyme selection! Loved it :)

[John117]

:) Nice poem, keep it up!

[Alli]

Wow, I really like this! Very relatable; good job!

[JaimeElVargas]

Incredible work, keep it up!

[Alonzo Sherrell]

~Love it!
~Is it 'us' or 'we' that measures who and what we're meaning to be?
~Because each moment will ever be how 'we' perceive them to be ~&~ Each moment can reveal to 'us' the realities of how it will or should be.
~Nicely done. Life's past is the only part that is scripted, but is our purpose laced within those lines?
~Again, nicely done. (:

[Katherine Wyatt]

~ a fine work... enjoyed the external rhyme scheme and happy to meet you

[Kiwi.jh]

This is really good work. your word choice is amazing and overall the poem is so relatable and emotional.