Secret

This is a poem for anyone who has just layed down and cried their heart out.

 

Today I lie awake,

In my bed I make,

Many sounds from my tears,

I haven't cried like this in years,

I wonder and cry,

I feel like I'll die,

I lay down to sleep,

This is a secret I will keep.

Reviews

[WildRose]

Very good writing, sad but good.

Keep it up!

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[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very good.. this is even better than the last piece.. great flow and rhythm here.. sadness.. crying and pain .. all part of being human! Many do hold these emotions to themselves.. I have been there too.. thank you so much for sharing.. enlightening but sad! =)

[brittneymarie]

This peice was quite good :]

I like how the rhythm flows down from each line
Until the very end :]

keep writing good job