poetic love

love can be poetic

girl love
those who care
not the ones
with a creeping stare

girls want
love and care
and i have
plenty to spare

i've got their backs
when in need
theres no need
for crazy speed

dont rush
the love you hold
left in a
world so cold

i have loved
but never been found
i listen closely
so hear the sound

people laugh
at what you say
tomarrow is
a brand new day

eyes like pools
deep and blue
i could swim
from me to you

dont rush love
it never wins
i pray to god
for my sins

the world spins
around so fast
but i dont pay attention
to the past

Reviews

[T. Logan]

I like it, but it seems like it ends quickly, like nothing is really resolved. I don' t know, maybe I'm just insane. (I am.) It's good though.