love hurts

love hurts
like a broken love song
the whole worlds
singing along

the universe
is trapped by love
all into fights
push n shove

love is crazy
in every way
it loves you lots
but waits for the day

that we all fail
and suck at life
but i wait for the day
where i have kids and a wife

life is good
in all ways
love is impossible
i miss the days

Reviews

[just is]

So truthful really, deep and profound.
I like the poeticness. you are very talented.
Keep writing always.