no love

no love no love no good love

no love
is ever good
love is hard
just like wood

im bored
of life
im sharp
like a knife

i love life
but not all the time
i maybe crazy
but i love to rhyme

i know my poem
was very fun
but now
its done

Reviews

[whispereversolightly]

Such a wonderful poetic flow of words.

[李[A]]

I enjoyed the last few lines :). The rest seemed a little depressing as you said, but again, it conveys this spoken completely non-clandestine view of what life is like. I thank you for sharing a poem like this and look forward to more!