loving life

when ur loving life

a life full of love
is nothing but shame
everyone but god
is to blame

living life
to the brim
as the lights
start to dim

my life is full
of supprises and hell
i hate it when people say
get well

i love living life
to the brim
of no regrets
god forgive my sin

everyone hates me
even me
im full of regrets
dont you see

i know my rap
wasnt fun
but now
its done

Reviews

[The fallen of innocence]

cool, i actually am impressed by it

[raymond]

oh and i ment poem where it says rap

[raymond]

if i can get 10 comments i will write a poem of god