lovesick

dont u hate
love sick
when theres no
bones to pick

being lovesick
is very bad
when im lovesick
im very sad

in the end
its always great
but i always feel
like a cheepskate

i know my poem
was very fun
but now
its done

Reviews

[The fallen of innocence]

nice rhyming ray

[Tasha]

I loved the rhyming in this it added to the effect.

"In the end
its always great
but i always feel
like a cheepskate"

I loved that you did a really good job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[raymond]

when i read this poem i always feel so bad inside but i also feel good because i can express my feelings through poetry and passion

[raymond]

i love this one