Big girl with stamina

I dreamt of living in a world of big Panasonic cameras and little red cars...
On a tiny Bounty island, where I don’t need great stamina
to feel like healing my scars.
I dreamt of the world where I’m with my young papa,
stay hand-in-hand and look at my mom.
Of the world where my yellow skirt is beautiful
and the highest tree is a palm.
But I woke up at night and looked in the mirror beside my cozy bed...
I’m 25, that big girl with stamina, curls
and happy years ahead.

Reviews

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Your poem is full of strong desires. May all of them get true some day. Wish you very happy years ahead :)

[jennifer little]

good poem great flow wonderful job

[Chris]

We live each day - often so slowly we can feel they'll never pass, and yet the years are so fleetingly short.

[Mariam]

Hello, Chris! So happy to see your review :) how are you doing?

[Chris]

Is a mild morning here ...good coffee, interesting views and thoughts. You?

[Mariam]

It’s an evening here) walked in the forest and listened to birds sinning :) nice evening

[Chris]

Evening walks in Spring fueled vistas ...scents, sights, and sounds ARE a heady place for both men and women - if they take their time and are "aware". Nice time to spread a jacket and just pause a bit...