Tie in a bow

Fly through my belly

with dark wine ribbons,

embracing my waist,

 tie in a bow…

How sweet…

The night sky is ebon.

The Moon and deep sea

together flow.

Reviews

[Lluvs]

Very graceful
Enjoyed reading this (:

[Mariam]

Thanks for stopping by (:

[Lluvs]

No problem (:

[Alfred Kukitz]

Beautiful work of art. I felt like I was swimming in your words. What a graceful feel!

[Mariam]

Thanks! Very nice of you.

[Pixieblue]

It may be because i watched the lost boys earlier, but this reminds me of a sexual vampire. Happy with his new life at night, quenching his thirst with the sweet taste of blood.

[Mariam]

Thanks for your creative review!

[A. Amos]

Elegantly crafted, especially the line..."The moon and the sea together flow."

[Mariam]

Thanks, dear reader!

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear...

[Sasha]

Beautiful ..
Loved every part of it !

[Mariam]

Thanks for stopping by:)

[Chris]

The "feel" of this one was sensual, of course that is where my mind is as well - so things take on overtones that have a depth of additional feeling.

[Mariam]

thanks for stopping by and sharing your feeligs with me)

[Chris]

You have a way of being ...just so, and that lets me share this moment - with you.

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

What a brilliant poem ? I liked the flow and imagery of this Gem, you were brilliant with the word play here and it was kind of almost taken on the word prompt.
My favourite lines from your master piece are How sweet…The night sky is ebon.The Moon and deep seatogether flow.

Keep writing and I would like to add you in my friend list because you write beautifully.

[Mariam]

Thanks for your kind review:)

[emmajoy]

What beautiful words... it's as if they're sleep.walking through that ebon sky and melting into a glorious moment. Love it, truly love it.

Wishing you and your family and friends a billion happy days ahead. Emma

[Mariam]

Thanks, dear Emma.Glad that you like it. Wish you a miracle, pleasant thoughts and happiness

[emmajoy]

:) plus more smiles