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God, I’m wrapped in woe

You trapped my sin and made me glow…

Now, slapped, I give the other cheek and hear

How quietly inwards of me you toe.

Reviews

[MichaelsLyric.com]

This is pretty brilliant. This little piece, in its own way, it describes the entire existence. Not only that, but it also gives some of a human perspective. Nice work, thank you for sharing.

[Mariam]

thanks for your kind review and stopping by! :)

[Neon]

Ha! This's now a funniest as well as an an interesting write.
Keep on!

[Rahul]

Once again you did an awesome as well as an incredible job by making and dropping this piece here. I liked this real piece that came right from the bottom of your heart :) Well penned :)

[Mariam]

thanks for stopping by)

[Rahul]

Your welcome, Mariam. I always do enjoy reading your stuffs :)

[BjH]

Gripping I think, almost excitement as if this is a brief moment revealed. Title drew me to look. Very nice.

[Mariam]

Thanks for stopping by and your kind review!