To the south

To the south

A Poem by Mariam

Days are washed away with the waves of your sea.

Playing with sands, old shelves wanted to see

How easily love could dissolve in your mouth.

Hours twirled seagulls and flew to the south.

© 2013 Mariam


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I love the metaphors that ties the whole poem in a beautiful light...I truly enjoyed reading your lovely poem.

~Ev

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mariam

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and your kind review)
Babe Roxx

11 Years Ago

You are so very welcome...it was my pleasure.

~Ev
I liked the backdrop effect of this, with sketched nuance telling of a deeper tale

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mariam

11 Years Ago

So glad that you like.Thx for reading

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Added on May 12, 2013
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Tags: nature, philosophy, love, romance

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Mariam

Armenia



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