Grinding the fear

Tell me what worth is and what is not.

God crosses all t’s, your certain i’s I dot.

Now, swallowing ages, assure me, dear,

If I want to drink coffee, grinding its fear?

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

Great job Mariam:)

[Mariam]

thanks for stopping by :)

[Wórdsmíth]

well, now you're really impressin' me to write such kinda beautiful pieces. Wht the thing you are ...you're pretty good in writin', even i'm readin' here such kinda a piece which i wanted to read ..indeed..yeah, i really wanted to read such kinda piece's and i've read here only and only i think because of you "Mariam"...you're a pretty nice n skilly writer...it appears by your deep poetric words...through your poem;s depth...
words that you use always seemed damn powerful and ripped me always from inner..
well, it's again an amazin' write..i think i wanna read your more work..well, i'll b read, but as you know ..."Due to shortage of time", i couldn't read your more work, ...but as i get much time, i'll read your more writin'...your more such kinda piece's...
keep write such kinda short piece;s, because i love to read short...(well, moreover it saves my time...lol..)
well writtten...very nice flow of ink as usual.

[Mariam]

Thank you! Very glad that you like my poems, thanks for stopping by :)

[Sami Khalil]

A brilliant play on coffee and fear and how grinding can affect us in both...:)

[Mariam]

Thanks for stopping by :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Kitty Davies]

Very nice, but on the last line, stating it as a question doesn't read well but it should really be a statement to make it hit home that you're making a point.

[Mariam]

Thanks for your review.I get your point :)