Spank with your Devil

Cry and shout through the walls of death,

Like hounds of hell bate now your breath.

Prey on the silence, snarl at God’s whistle

Spank with your Devil, gnawing his gristle.

Reviews

[thewritingthespian]

I keep reading this over and over again! Haha i love it!

[Mariam]

Happy that you fell in love with it :)

[thewritingthespian]

It's amazing how something so horrible can be so beautifully written. Nice title by the way.

[Mariam]

thank you! :)

[Jayden Ireton]

This is a very deep poem. I found it complete in very few words. It was wonderfully written and makes you think.

[Mariam]

Thanks for reading and your kind review)glad that you like

[Ayvid N]

The futility of it all...
We can be like the devil himself but can we disturb the Great Order?
This poem is deep...

[Mariam]

Thanks for reading :)

[Sympatico]

This is very Da Vinci code!

[Mariam]

haha thx for making me smile)