Heart's basin

Heart's basin

A Poem by Mariam

If you were a sad lyric song with the howling duduk’s sounds,

Inhaling your words deeply, love's mist could make the rounds...

If you were a bottle of wine made from the sweet seedless raisin,

Doves would sour your taste, swimming in the pure heart’s basin.

© 2013 Mariam


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Mariam
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uEDboHDSU50

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great work, enjoyed this one very much.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mariam

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading)glad you enjoy
Great write, love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mariam

11 Years Ago

thanks for reading)
nicely done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mariam

11 Years Ago

thank you for reading
This seems like a Russian romance song full of the Eastern flavor . I like the term heart's basin. Keep us serenaded...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My favourite singer and we both share a lot of features especially the face...:)
Mariam

11 Years Ago

oh really nice
I love his songs)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

If I was him I will serenade you but I guess you have to listen to him...Lol just kidding...:)
This is fantastic! Well done.
you have talent



Posted 11 Years Ago


Mariam

11 Years Ago

thanks for reading and your kind review)
Runswithflyingdolphins

11 Years Ago

thats ok :)
Yes well I see myself as a humming bird, so I guess all of this applies to me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mariam

11 Years Ago

then your heart could hum this melody,while beating
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v7_c1Nryzh.. read more

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