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You smell like an apple greenish and fresh,

Pampered by sun rays, savory flesh.

Feeling deserted in life’s orchard or grove,

Pray in the silence, breeze may be tough.

Reviews

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

This makes me want to read more of the *** poems!

You write with what I call 'Russian sensualism!" lol

[Mariam]

oh russian mystery soul haha :) it's funny,nevertheless very pleasant.I'm happy that someone enjoys it.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

What of your Moscow roots and flawless english, seriously?

[Mariam]

Hmm well I'm Armenian originally,but have always lived in Russia...I know 4 languages and study linguistics at Moscow State Linguistic Uni,my main subjects are English and German as well...so I have to develop it every day) Honestly, I started to write poems only for language practice...:)

[Mariam]

Btw,thanks for the compliment!

[Michael Soul]

I like the flow of this

[Mariam]

thanks )

[EurasianFlavour]

Agreed, love the imagery!

[Mariam]

thanks:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow...love it. it is a vivid, capitivating poem I ever read :) I enjoy it! Keep writing!

[Mariam]

thank you :)!

[Stacey Watts]

Very nicely done here. The imagery I well expressed.

[Mariam]

thanks for reading!:)