Spilled...

We go to the East,

We run to the East,

We fly to the East,

Is it true?

You are gone.

Years are threads -

Went through …

Happiness hides, so does my sorrow.

Heaven, tell me if I love him or not?

Look!

The water splashed on the morrow…

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

I had a pair of blue jeans like this poem, then time and my belly wore them out.

[Mariam]

) weird

[lee von cleef]

Ok yes, but I have had several pairs of jeans that were true, a part of me,then thread bare,thin they can't be replaced . I keep waiting for a sign like your splashing ,but not yet.I will pick another poem and give a stronger comment one not so over the edge Weird. smile.

[Mariam]

Threads always bare)no mystery here. I think you misunderstood the splashing but I shouldn't tell you,as we all interpret some paradoxical words depending on the mood.Anyways...:)

[emmaline]

I love the rhymes at the end, it ties the whole poem together.

[Mariam]

glad that you like :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem. Had the feel of the classic poetry. Questions of love and life are answered by living. Nice flow of thoughts lead the reader to a good ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mariam]

Very happy to see your review again.Thanks for reading :)

[Michael Soul]

nice words

[Mariam]

thanks :)

[Michael Soul]

any time

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Mariam]

Thank you for reading ...:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[John]

I am reminded of DH Lawrence's poem, Look! We have come through! It tells of survival, of two people coming through a difficult time together with their relationship intact.

These lines have a fleeting quality expressing a mind buzzing with questions and a heart full of emotion.

[Mariam]

I'm happy you feel the right mood of these lines. Thanks for the review. I will read Lawrence's poem :)