Taking the Beating

My teeth dangle out of my mouth

like windchimes.

Everytime I speak they clang

together,

 

producing sounds that should

only be played

on a deaf man's

drum.

Reviews

[Will Zombie]

you can speak, it doesnt hurt anyone.

its a short piece of fire. forgive my dramatic analysis.
how much emotion and energy do you put into your words?
i am horrible at comprehension but i feel i understood this.