I am too old to cry

Nobody is too old to cry, but nobody deserves your tears either.

When there is a problem between you and her,
there won't be a solution because you two are
stubborn. But you won't think she cares because
she won't cry.

No, she won't cry.

--

When she smiles and says everything is all right,
you won't be able to tell that it's just a lie because
she won't cry.

No, she won't cry.

--

When you tell her things she does not want to hear,
you will be obligated to quit eventually because she
won't cry.

No, she won't cry.

--

When you push her back a step further from what she
tried to achieve, you'll feel awkward because she won't
cry.

No, she won't cry.

--

And when you hurt her, she will endure that pain until it
starts to finally reflect on you because she won't cry.

--

No, she never will.

Reviews

[Senseless whatever]

Nice poem over all. I would suggest using some punctuation or restructuring to give the poem more flow for the reader. There are a few sticking points that can be fixed just by moving a word. Again nice job.

[atom]

Very nicely worded and probably quite relate-able for a lot of people. I also agree you're never too old to cry.

[Flo]

My friend, that is a very lovely poem, good job for a first post, I wonder though what is the inspiration :)

Keep on working like this, your good ^-^

Flo