can only go up

can only go up

A Poem by luna rose

this linoleum is an author

with tendency towards such casual

punctuation.

 

so undemanding:

 

not quite

sincere

 

yet so sure

of where it

ends.

 

and sure

of its

plastic.

 

do my feet distress? should i clean

it tomorrow in

ode?

 

i will sleep upon it

because i have no

qualms.

 

because the floor is my

fate,

even though

 

it claims to have seen me

walk. 

© 2017 luna rose


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The floor begs for you to climb. A pestilent b***h hoping you do, and fall. She love to watch you run. For her poor sense of humor, is the funniest joke of them all.

I enjoyed your words. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


just make sure you are dressed,floors have eyes lol

Posted 7 Years Ago


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luna rose
luna rose

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