Wasted

Wasted

A Poem by Tempest
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A piece about not answering the call of your inner muse.

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Broken thoughts lie
shattered on the pavement,
an aftermath of an argument,
crunched beneath random feet.

 

What love lies discarded
in fallow fields and shallow graves,
buried in an attempt to survive,
but haunting nonetheless.

 

What music goes unplayed,
in the fettered mind,
tethered in monotonous life,
Notes of never realized symphonies.

 

Creation wanes in empty veins,
without mourning she passes on,
Slowly retreating, receeding,
Til the tears do not come.

© 2008 Tempest


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Poem is amazing. The photo made the words come alive. The sadness and disappointment can be felt in your words. The ending was perfect for this poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow this is beautiful i love the emotion


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Briliant! Such a dark desperation voiced through deep water and heavy rain... Your words lie bitter in the soul, fettered, tethered to the barren earth... A magnificent piece that haunts my heart where I once walked through these dark waters...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As a fellow writer I can relate well to this... you must seize the moment and write when you feel it or it will be lost forever... What a brilliant piece of writing, I see you don't let your inspiration pas you by.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whoa. This is really good. Usually I don't dig the non-rhyming poems, but yours seems to hold this underlying rhythm that really struck me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tempest
Tempest

Tampa, FL



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