All The Stars In The Sky

All The Stars In The Sky

A Poem by Tessa Melendez

Lay beside me...
And look up at all the stars in the sky
Let's forget about all the scars
Forget about how fast time can pass us by

Lay beside me...
And think about all the dreams floating in the sky
Think of about all the things we hope to come by
All the things we hope to see

Lay beside me...
And take me down your memory lane
Tell me all the memories that often run through your brain
Laugh and cry with me as I do the same to you

Lay with me in some peaceful place
Tell me all your dreams
Help me mend mine
For sometimes they seem to be coming apart at the seams

Lay with me quietly...
As I tell you how little I care for all the stars in the sky
But, I still hope they never die
Even as time passes us by

As you lay beside me dreaming your beautiful dreams
I remain awake
My eyes on all the stars in the sky
Watching as they burn like tiny matches

Laying beside you...
As you dream your beautiful dreams true
I look at all those stars in the sky
Watching as they roll by

All the while...
I think over my dreams
Wondering what happened to them
Wondering why it seems...they've become so empty

And I realize...
It's because I no longer care for all the stars in the sky
Why take all the stars to shine brightly in life...
When you can become one yourself?

© 2017 Tessa Melendez


Author's Note

Tessa Melendez
First stanza came to me out of nowhere. No real inspiration, just...POOF! Wrote it out and did little editing. I don't really know what the point of it is or anything. It's just a piece. I figured I'd keep it and post it. It's different from my others soo... Hope you guys like it. :)

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This is written in such a soft, wisp-like voice that the words seem to float into the sky like your dreams and ends like an epiphany that you/we/anyone can shine as bright as the stars as long as we are ready to put in the effort. The first and the penultimate stanzas are stand outs, but that takes nothing away from the rest, or overall power of the piece, just my personal opinion :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


You collected a number of oft-used images/concepts (stars, memories, dreams) which can lead to a forgettable message (so much said many times before), but your poem surprised the heck out of me becuz of how you put these images/concepts together in a fresh & original way, that's very relatable to real life & honest feelings. In stanza 1, I love using the words "stars" and "scars" together. Stanzas 3 & 4 remind me of doing this very thing with my best friend in the two years before he died. Then just when everything feels warm & fuzzy, stanza 5 interjects a surprising idea, that stars are actually meaningless to the narrator. I love the way it ties into the last stanza, where we find out the narrator is tired of being a spectator in his/her own life, & ready to be a star him/herself. Just when I thought this was going to be a passive love poem, then we are slapped with a meaningful inspirational ending. I like the way you've blended gentle expression with straightforward meaning here. No guessing at your meaning, which I prefer.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tessa Melendez

8 Years Ago

I love the feeling, but not always the outcome. Poems written in that way are annoying sometimes be.. read more
barleygirl

8 Years Ago

After years of practice, I think the goal is to capture the immediacy of that initial outpouring, bu.. read more
Tessa Melendez

8 Years Ago

I totally get that.
Wow. This might be one of my favorite poems now. The words flow really well. The 4th stanza is my favorite, I think. It actually wettened my eyes. Thank you for sharing this poem. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Marcus Sergiu David

8 Years Ago

I think that random inspiration is the strongest. Sure, a writer can find at least a grain of inspir.. read more
Tessa Melendez

8 Years Ago

Not always for me. I get like a stanza or a couple of lines and go off it.
Marcus Sergiu David

8 Years Ago

Well, a few lines is always what I personally start with, be it random or not.
So many thoughts... How gorgeously the imagery you have painted here, which seemed vivid... The beginning of the poem flows as the two hearts lay beside together, the Poet's heart follows her beloved's heart and how it roams with the natural beauty... The careful and Sweet love that the poet has inside her heart completely overwhelms the whole poem... The most important part of this write is its genuine emotions and passion... Once again hat's off to you...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tessa Melendez

8 Years Ago

I never thought it was that great of a piece. None of those thoughts of yours crossed my mind. I j.. read more

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Added on July 8, 2016
Last Updated on September 24, 2017

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Tessa Melendez
Tessa Melendez

Wilmington, DE



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I am 20 years old and have been writing since I was 12 years old. I started as a story-writer, I'm more of a poet now. My stories have kinda fallen off and the poetry comes more easily now, more as a .. more..

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