Wishes (Part 2)

I wish...

I could find the words to describe...

The way I feel sometimes,

That I could purge my mind...

My heart...

Of the parts that have died...

I wish...

I could find a way to...

Empty out the darkest parts of me,

So that I might find ways to be...

Something more than hurt...

Something more than a damaged soul...

I wish...

That Love didn't despise me so much,

That I didn't feel like...

Finding Love is pointless,

Every love I find will disappear with a touch...

A word...

I wish...

I didn't feel the need to be so independent

Not meant...

To share a life...

To share Contentment...

For fear that someone will always break...

I wish...

The cold, hard power that replaces my tears...

The feeling of unbreakability...

Could transfer its power to my heart,

Tear apart my fears

Make me stone cold and unbreakable

I wish...

I could stare each person who tore up my heart in the face...

And say I don't care anymore,

Say that my heart no longer aches and breaks,

Tear out the piece of my heart that once loved them,

And leave it for them to take

I simply can't take it anymore

I'm tired of my heart aching and breaking

Everyone taking and taking

There is nothing more

I'm not sorry

Author's Note

Just having some hard times. Kinda don't wanna explain it. I mean - the poem sort of does, but not really. *sigh* These next few days might be hard to get through....

Reviews

[Lorry]

Again, as with part one, you take a new angle from the heart and spin it's perspective from part one. You sighed in your authors note, which I thought very apt, as when I had finished reading this, my first thoughts were of an almost silent sigh, happy to have poured out your heart on paper, but sad at having to. Both parts portray the different angles of emotion so well, and go together like night and day, or light and dark.

[Inject Positivity]

Tessa I don't know what to say, this piece of poetry is full of emotions... The way you filled your poem with the truest feelings of your heart is absolutely heart touching... I'm speechless, your word choices your thoughts truly touched me frnd... I don't know what you are going through but I am here for you frnd, if you ever need me to talk to you please feel free to leave a mail frnd... You are very precious... You will get through all such feelings and will find strength... God bless you...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Tessa Melendez]

Thank you for your very sweet-hearted review. I was going through a tough moment and just poured my feelings out in a poem on my way home from my job. I'm still sort of feeling it, but I think I'll be okay. It's a great comfort to know that I have friends that are there for me in case I need them. I can't thank you enough for your sweetness and loyalty. :)

[Inject Positivity]

I'm grateful to have a sweet frnd like you, don't be upset, feel the feelings and hope for a new day... I know you will get through this... Remember the song "sun is shining and so are you", you are a shining soul...

[Tessa Melendez]

Thank you.

[Teja]

Hard times always brings the best of us.
The pain with which the poem is written is evident. Nice one.

[Tessa Melendez]

Thank you for reviewing my piece