Do you remember?

Do you remember?

A Poem by 「tell me true」
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Do you...
Remember when we spent every day together,
and we would promise each other forever?
Do you...
Remember staying up all night long,
and how you would sing me every love song?
Do you...
Remember holding me in your arms,
and how we'd fall asleep ranting about stars?
Do you...
Remember all of our stupid fights,
and realizing that neither of us were right?
Do you...
Remember the sound of my voice,
because walking away was your choice.
Do you...
Remember the good years,
because I've tried to wash them away with tears.

© 2010 「tell me true」


Author's Note

「tell me true」
Wrote this during a roleplay. Hope you like.

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I miss you

Posted 14 Years Ago


I feel a great sense of urgency running through this poem. Great writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very strong poem. Love have many good times and when the separation of love leave the tears to wash away the pain. A sad ending to a very good poem. Thank you. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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They call me Staz; an April baby. I reside in Southern Colorado with my boyfriend and my parents. I write, roleplay, and contemplate the cosmos~! Though much is never updated here there is a good rea.. more..

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