SurfingA Story by 10000 people stand aroundTaken from my experience of surfing off the Pembrokeshire coast, near St. David's.I remember surfing. Carrying the wetsuit, still wet with
brine, to the changing rooms. Squeezing into the wetsuit feet first, then body
and arms. The cold, musty fabric hugged me tight. Zipper up, boots on, surfboard
out, and the slow walk down the coastal path towards the beach. Shivers of
early morning light reached out through the dewy mist as I trudged down the
path, leaving watery footprints as I went. I creaked the wooden gate at the end
of the path open. A cow mooed. A rocky cliff rose up to my left, and jagged
boulders leaned against them. They stared at me. The surfboard made a soft ‘thump-thump’ sound as it bumped down
the path, followed by a smooth sliding noise as gravel and dirt turned into
sand. A small lifeguard hut stood hunched to the far right, as if it didn’t
want to be seen. Hanging on the railing I could just make out a deflated
balloon of what must have previously been bright yellow, long having since lost
the helium in it, and its colour with the constant sea spray. Farther along the
beach, rocks and pebbles replaced the sand temporarily, covered with seaweed
and dotted with shallow pools, a remnant of the high tide soon to return,
smothering it all like a blanket. The drier sand up the bank would pretend nothing
happened. As I entered the sea, water seeped into my boots and smaller waves
that had already broken lapped at my feet. I pushed the board out in front of
me and started to wade. Soon a massive wave washed over me, pummelling me to the
ground. I got up and looked for my surfboard, and finally saw its familiar blue
form lying prone washed ashore. It was at this point that I remembered that I
needed to tie the leash around my ankle. Back out at sea, I mounted my board and started to paddle
out, the white water of wave crests washing over the board. The silence of the
rhythmic crash of the waves was broken by only a seagull overheard. When I was
out far enough, I got off the board turned, making sure that I was always in
between the board and the waves, so it wouldn’t crash against my head when a
larger wave broke. I slung my right leg over the end of the board lazily, and
sat there bobbing up and down, waiting for a wave to ride. And I waited. A boat
drifted slowly across the horizon, shimmering a little. Bared branches danced
farther onshore and their maple coloured leaves danced to the wind. The
remaining oaks were red bombs among the smaller aspen. When I looked back the
boat had disappeared. Finally a large enough wave started to crest and I mounted
the board again, lying flat facing towards the beach, and started to paddle.
The wave started to pick me up and I did three more powerful strokes just as
the wave broke, sending me crashing ahead. As I started to stand up on the
board, my supporting hand slipped, and I brought my hands up to protect my head
as I fell into the churning ocean. Submerged among the waves, only a dulled
cacophony could be heard until I surfaced, once again by the shore. I picked up
my board, turned it around and began to paddle out to sea. Too soon it was well past noon, so I decided to head back in
for a late lunch. Dragging my board along the sand I noticed an old man lying
on a deck chair, basking in the sunlight, his wrinkles prominent like the
yellow balloon tied to the hut. A child screeched in the distance in the water,
watched over by his smiling mother. Dry sand began to stick to my soggy boots
as I dragged the board, leaving a trail in the sand. The rock and pebble bed
was nowhere to be seen. © 2015 10000 people stand aroundAuthor's Note
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Added on March 24, 2015 Last Updated on March 24, 2015 Tags: surfing, short, story, 10000 people stand around Author10000 people stand aroundLondon, United KingdomAboutI write lots of little descriptions, and was wondering if anyone else would enjoy them. more..Writing
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