CarnivalA Story by 10000 people stand aroundShort description of a carnival in its opening hours before people arrive.The key twisted in the worn lock, turning into place with a
clunk. He pushed lightly against the gate and it swung open. The hinges shriek.
The worker shuffled in, sighing deeply, his reflective yellow jacket a blemish
amongst the mélange of rub-worn tent flaps, greyed steel beams, and empty
stands. The air wasn't cold but it chilled him nevertheless, so he stuffed his
hands under his armpits " his pants weren't made with pockets. The trees whistled
with a gust of wind, their bare branches dancing like a marionette of twigs. A
leaf caught against the worker’s leg, bullied by the autumn breeze over the
gate and across the fairground. He brushed it off his leg and it was crushed underfoot
gently. He approached the roller-coaster in the centre of the grounds, a hunk of
metal twisting towards the sky like a deformed snake, and started to climb the
service ladder " once red, but now flecked with repeated use and rust, much
like the rest of the ride. Reaching the top, he paused and took in the view. Leafless
trees were sparsely sprawled across the swathe of flat grassland, candles on a
birthday cake that abruptly ended at a characterless town. A small range of
mountains leered at him from atop the horizon, the scrawled mounds of stone seemed
to roll up the steep bare slope, like mountain waves. He turned to the control
board and pulled the lever. Lights flickered on hesitantly all along the track,
illuminating it against the dull early morning grey, and a cart pulled up to
the boarding track, returning to work after a night shift. Eerie carnival music
started to play below, and the worker whistled to himself as he climbed back
down the ladder, mimicking the familiar tune. When he reached the bottom he
heard the gate shriek again, and a woman with long black hair stepped in, a
jumble of half-finished make-up, assorted gymnast clothes and signs of sleep
deprivation. She gave a friendly nod to the worker before turning and heading into
the dressing room in the back of the carnival, behind an unremarkably large
circus tent. Her ragged jogging shoes were soon followed by another key,
another turning of the lock, another grinding of metal against metal and a
steady trickle of people flowing through the gate in to the carnival, switching
on rides and preparing stalls. Giant, spinning, grinning teacups whirr to life
like they never stopped, the ker-clunk-clunk of rain covers being drawn out reverberated
faintly, drowned out by the symphony of foxtrots and waltzes from the
loudspeakers, and the cacophony of pinging game music and boxes dragged,
dropped, picked up and placed again. Game show lights flicker epileptically and
the humdrum of chit chat takes it place. The aroma of cooked pretzels
permeates, not quite blocking out the faint smell of manure. Someone, somewhere
laughs. A sign is propped up against the gate: “The Breathtaking Balthazar - Master of the Unknown- Showing every 3 hours, on the hour! First show: 10:00 AM Last show: 20:00 PM” A car pulls up beyond the gate and a small child stares with
a mixture of awe and excitement at the dreamland of music and games. The parents
smell manure. © 2015 10000 people stand aroundAuthor's Note
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1 Review Added on March 24, 2015 Last Updated on March 24, 2015 Tags: short story, carnival, description, 10000 people stand around Author10000 people stand aroundLondon, United KingdomAboutI write lots of little descriptions, and was wondering if anyone else would enjoy them. more..Writing
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