Without, Just.

Without, Just.

A Poem by tekphobik
"

Do without as long as you just...

"
Without Meaning, Just Empty.
Without Purpose, Just Drifting.
Without Pain, Just Masochism.
Without Innocence, Just Guilt.
Without Perfection, Just Broken.
Without Rest, Just Keep Going.
Without Emotion, Just Rational.
Without Fragility, Just Monstrous.
Without Passion, Just Flatlining.
Without Tolerance, Just Prejudice.
Without Compassion, Just Hatred.
Without Patience, Just Reaction.
Without Remorse, Just Immoral.
Without Empathy, Just Unfeeling.
Without Caring, Just Callous.
Without Serenity, Just Chaos.
Without A Soul, Just A Shell.
Without Life, Just A Ghost.
Without Deliverance, Just Forsaken.
Without Divinity, Just Human.
Without Without, Just Everything.

© 2011 tekphobik


Author's Note

tekphobik
I could have gone on forever with this one. I curtailed it and locked it away in a cabinet so it didn't grow longer than the city streets.

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BUT... I love city streets!! yah. Isn't it unreal how nothing morphs into everything? And how everything....used to be NOTHING??
BRILLIANT!
masqued_muse

Posted 13 Years Ago


Usually I don't like reading things that repeat a word each line but this is well done. Thoughtful and sad

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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tekphobik
tekphobik

Red Deer, Alberta, Canada



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I live for the words. Artistry is taking pieces of your soul out and throwing them against a wall to make someone else feel something or experience some sort of insight. It's the only thing worth li.. more..

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